Deviation Actions
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Page 1
Panel 1; Establishing, borderless landscape, the terrain of Ciruiacc, a hotspring bubbles at the top of a hill, surrounded by thistles and other vegetation.
Panel 2; mid; a hooded figure, barrel chested, stands over a spring
Panel 3; close of verdant landscape figure fills a vial with water from the spring
Panel 4;Â long, Bird skeleton in foreground partially concealed by bush, this is a wild and untamed land, displayed in the rocks and crags of the place and the danger cemented by this image. figure stands and takes a drink of the water he's collected in back by spring
Panel 5; close/mid, Adelai smirks as he lowers the now empty vial from his lips.
Adelai: “Excellent. Just as expected.â€
Page 2
Panel 1; wide, Adelai draws a larger flask from his robe and kneels as if to fill it from the pool. Staff is visible arm enters reaching for staff
Panel 2; Close on Adelai's left eye, squints, looksÂ
Panel 3; Worm's Eye, Adelai spins, swinging a beautiful sword quickly in a deadly arc behind him.
Panel 4; OTS (Mudd's shoulder) view of Adelai, view of confused expression, sword drawn
Panel 5; OTS (Adelai), view of Mudd shadowed on rise in ground, he speaks, “Ah, Hello friend, you seem to have taken my staff by mistake. I must ask you to return it... it's quite important to me.
Page 3
Panel 1; Mid of Mudd, looking comfortable despite juggling numerous items, while examining the staff, holding his walking staff under his arm. “Dis staff is way far out mon. I wonder what happens if I...†Adelai, off panel - “Yes, it is far out, of the reach of its true possesor!â€
Panel 2; Mid of Mudd, surprised, looking at staff , Adelai from offpanel, “Return it at once!â€
Panel 3; Close of Mudd's hand on staff, translucent hand, energy transferring into staff. Adelai, from offpanel, “Or I shall be forced to call the constabulary!â€Â
Panel 4; Mid of Mudd, smirking, he appears to be standing in a stream of steam issuing from a fissure he's near in the ground “Well, I suppose I could get dis back to you mon, but you'd owe me a solid.â€
Panel 5; mid, birds eye of Adelai, waving hand in front of him, “Brigand! Highwayman! Pickpocket! Staff-Snatcher! Filcher!â€Â
Panel 6; Close, adelai pointing in front of him “Röazai! â€
Page 4
Panel 1; Geyser of water envelops Mudd, mudd: “Roa-what?â€
Panel 2; long low angle from the mist on Adelai, clicking his heels.“ Haha, I got you now, robber...â€
Panel 3; mid torso of Adelai, winded, wary “...thief... Where's my staff ?..â€
Panel 4; Adelai spins and looks up Mudd, off panel - “Well mon, that none to nice now. Why d'ya hafta go be dat way about it?
Panel 5; OTS Adelai towards Mudd, standing on top of a cliff, holding Adelai's staff. Adelai shakes fist, Adelai, “Because it's my bloody staff, that's why!â€
Panel 6; Close on Mudd “I seem to be da one holdin' it now. Doesna' seem to like you so much for what's yours.†, from offpanel, “That's not how it works you thief!â€
Panel 7; Close of Adelai angry, Mudd, from off-panel“But it is nine-tents of da constable's rule mon.â€
Page 5
Panel 1; Close on Mudd, smirking, “So, 'ow'bou'ti'time mon?†, from offpanel, “Excuse me?â€
Panel 2; Close on Adelai, mouth open looking properly confused, eyebrows working furiously, Mudd from offpanel, “Da solid, mon. -da favor.†, “Absolutely not. I do not negotiate with terrorists.â€
Panel 3; long of Mudd, still smirking, turning away from on top of the cliff, “Well mon, I guess I'll just be keeping de stick den.â€
Panel 4; Close of Adelai looking thoughtful, concerned, possibly constipated.
Panel 5; OTS from Adelai, watching Mudd walk away.
Panel 6; Mudd grows farther away, Adelai, “Wait!â€
Page 6
Panel 1; Adelai, looking sideways, grumbling, “I'll do it...â€
Panel 2; Long shot, Mudd, distant, raising a hand to his ear, “Sorry, mon, didn't hear you. What wa' dat now?â€
Panel 3; Adelai, shouting now, “I'LL DO YOU YOUR BLOODY FAVOR YOU-YOU-â€
Panel 4; Mudd smiling, suddenly close to Adelai, same level. “Das' great, mon. Now you just gots t'swear to da stcik 'ere.â€
Panel 5; Adelai “What, my sainted word isn't good enough for you?†, “Your word be fine mon, you still got's t' swear.â€
Page 7
Panel 1; Adelai, “If I must, you ruffian. But you'll pay for this someday.â€
Panel 2;Adelai's hand covers the staff.
Panel 3; Adelai, eyes closed with hand on staff“By this emblem of power I swear to provide one favor to this young man, called...â€
Panel 4; Close of Adelai, squinting inquisitively at Mudd, from offpanel, “Mudd.â€
Panel 5; As panel 2“Called Mudd.â€
Panel 6; Adelai, “; Now, what is this favor?†, “Oh, mon, it is a sad state of affiars... when da world is fallin' apart and you can't be trustin' nobody.â€
Page 8
Panel 1; Close of Mudd kneeling, scooping earth into his hands. “...when da world is fallin' apart...â€
Panel 2; long from Mudd's hip showing Adelai's face as Mudd sculpts the earth. “and you can't be trustin' nobody.â€
 Panel 3; OTS of Mudd looking at rock as he says, quitely “Wise man, build house on rock; rock stable.†and the earth solidifies into a rock.
Panel 4; Mudd hands rock to Adelai, “'Ere mon, dis oughtta'elp you out.â€
Panel 5; Adelai turns rock over, looking at it in disgust, “And what, pray-tell, am I supposed to do with a rock?â€
Panel 6; Shot of Mudd and of Adelai, Mudd smirking, “Well mon, it'll keep ya balanced.â€
Panel 7; Shot from under Mudd's arm, framing Adelai between his body, arm, and walking stick, Adelai puts stone in shoulder-bag. Mudd, “Now your journey begins, Adelai; remember that a gentleman always keeps his word.â€
Panel 7.5; inset of Adelai, confused, “Pardon?â€
Panel 8; Adelai blacks out, seeing Mudd's silhouette standing over him as he falls into the book.
Page 9
1; Bird's eye of an old west style street, figure spread-eagled in a sarape, a cowboy hat covers his eyes.
Panel 2; worm's eye, as the figure (Adelai) groggily sits up. “Where's my staff? Where am I?â€
Panel 3; movie slate, open in foreground, Adelai looking surprised framed in center of slate's clapper: Voice from Off-Panel: “Act 1, Scene 2; The Stranger Awakens in a Strange Land. Take 4, ACTION!â€
Adelai: “What?â€
Panel 4; black, fill to bleed, ¼ to 1/3 height of page. SFX; CLACK!